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[Xx Binno xX]

I was making a production sign for my legacy controller videos and i thought one of these might be good but not sure please leave feedback

 

[WetterThanWater]

The second one is better, but I would have used a better smoke brush and a cool render, still really great though!

 

[WetterThanWater]

http://planetrenders.net/ if you want a cool render..

 

[Xx Binno xX]

Thanks man i just started doing this stuff so it will take some time to get used to this. which one is better? second one as production 2?

 

[WetterThanWater]

I meant Production 1, sorry I said the second one because I meant second from the top

And don't worry, it all comes with experimenting and time.

 

[Xx Binno xX]

Should i put that slogan in productions 1 or leave it out?

 

[WetterThanWater]

I would personally leave it out.

 

[GJUnLeAsHeD]

i like the top one but it needs to be a lil clearer

 

[Fredrow]

Looks good.... They look way better after clicking on them and seeing them at full size....

 

[Xx Binno xX]

Looks good.... They look way better after clicking on them and seeing them at full size....

Thanks man